by Altruisticwon Jan 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I was once told that dreams are merely wishes your head makes. If that is true my heart and mind have the same idea of a dream come true. I dreamt of a beautiful summer day. I know not the year because our ages are no longer relevant. We are finally physically where we have always been emotionally, together. The sun and cool breeze caress all of your being making each curve seem deeper and intense even more enticing than thought possible. Your voice floats on flower scented gusts until its melodies reach my ear. The cool yet electric touch of your skin beckons me closer. our bodies yearn to be like our thoughts, one. We hold each other close. Our limbs intertwine and we become lost in each other. My passion meets your desire bonding our paths and making us "Forever One". |
Your beginning sentences are really well written and so is the whole poem. |