Sad and nciely done once again. 5/5

Awesome! 5/5

Your poems are filled with so much love and passion its hard to tear my eyes away from such a talent as yours.
great work

Very good poem. Your style is very to the point and very heartfelt. I noticed one typo

Happiness much to brief

it should be 'too' not 'to'. Just a little thing though. Good job!
Charisma*

Another powerful poem. i can relate to many of the lines in ur poems. xx

Awesome! Cindy, i loved this one, it was so sad.
love Tara-Kay

Its beautiful a real tearjerker im sorry if its about true events, you have a brilliant eloquent style to your poems xxx

Follow ur heart and most of the tym u ll get screwed
stamp it with ur feet and follow ur brain !!!
thats wut i learnt!

Shutting out this world
Closing my eyes again
You are here with me
Much easier to pretend

this is certainly an amazing stanza, complete poem is outstanding but u really shook me with this last one...this is really outstanding...u make me feel this way with every poem of urs.

u r simply the best.. ;o))

all the best and take care

Wow this is a great poem and thanx 4 the comment means alot

This was so very sad, yet s beautifully written.
I'm sorry you are in so much pain, I hope ou ind ways o move forward soon.
The flow was perfect, the imagery fantastic.