Great poem, great message! Nice flow and rhyme. Only one typo lol
And she excepted it with strength
It's actually ACCEPTED. But other than that....this was nice, and it's great you are reaching out into other forms of poetry!
Charisma*

Omg midnight... I cried as i read the last stanza.
You really hit a nerve with this piece
And i'm so glad that my nan passed away with her loved ones around her.. Although i wasn't there at the end, she was never alone and i'm thankful for that..
Your poem really hit home...
5/5!
*Gem*