This is very good! I love it!

This really touched my heart. How sad, your longing for the one you love can be felt in the words you write. Great Job!

I really liked this, i could really relate, great job <3

The emotion and feeling you put into the poem is great, but sometimes the rythm is a little off. good work though.

It was great i loved it, very sweet

I loved the emotion and depth you wrote with here. It was plain to see you truly loved this person and their leaving left you helpless.

"My smile was a faded memory"
^beautiful line.

Well done *5/5*