"If people would look inside
See the heart contained within
Instead of only seeing me
For my outer skin"

If indeed.....Cindy you are beautiful to me and your words are very touching. Keep writing! 5/5

Aww this poem is so sad!! it just made me wana cry for you cindy.. but even though iv neva seen u b4, i know that you are a nice, kind person inside.. this poem is magnificent 5/5 xoxox

WOw, what an emotionally powerful poem that was. I assume it's portraying the message that you should love someone for who they are.
good job.

Powerfully sad write perfect flow

"If people would look inside
See the heart contained within
Instead of only seeing me
For my outer skin"

I think at one point in life, ill or not, we all hopw to be judged from what we are on the inside other than the outside.
Excellent work hun
5/5
*Gem*

Awww...that is so sad. Depression hurts. It's true. But you should know that I always appreciate your comments on my poetry, as do many others. It's nice to that you take the time to do that for us...it always puts a smile in our hearts. Cheer up!
Charisma*

Excellent write of how a disabled homebound person views their life. You are one of the bravest people I know. I admire you so much.

Hey ur really good ther touching words XD

That was excellent.. it had a lot of heart in it.
I liked it a lot. 5/5.

You keep up the good work...remember there will always some one here for you to talk to

Hey that was really deep. very well written. xx

Wow. Sad and powerful.
"If people would look inside
See the heart contained within
Instead of only seeing me
For my outer skin"

I love the poem in it's entirety but this stanza sums it up so well. Society can be so cruel. I am glad that you have so many people who know and love you so much. Good job on this one!

Cindy, You have a lovely personality, and your heart and soul is as beautiful as a forest in the snow. Your poems and words are amazing.
love your friend, Tara-Kay

Another beautifully written piece. amazing. xxxx

Wow. I was surprised at how well this was written. I really enjoyed it a lot. It was simple, yet under the surface, it was complex if you really thought about it. I loved that about it. It left me wanting to read more about you in distress and how people don't see the real you. And trust me. I know how you feel. You're not alone. =)

Now, back to the poem. As I said before, I really enjoyed it. It flowed rather nicely for me. It didn't seem forced at all. And you stuck to the same syllables all the way through. Something I've always strived to achieve. =P The words you used was astounding. I loved it, very well done. I don't know what exactly to say lol. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I like this poem, I think I can relate to this part:

If people would look inside
See the heart contained within
Instead of only seeing me
For my outer skin

I think that way a lot, I think many people do, and that's what makes this poem good. It really touches everyone's heart. =)

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

That is what I feel also. I am never accepted of who I am or what I do. Keep strong, our kind will soon own society and show difference is the satisfaction. We are like squares and society are circles; no edges, nothing. Headstrong is what is. Inside, not the outside.

I realli loved this poem :D

Instead of only seeing me
For my outer skin

If only everyone could look at another and do just that. great poem xox sam

Aww..