Comments : To feel you here.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I love this. I love the first two stanzas. Iunno what to say. I'm not really thinking straight. But this poem was amazing, dear. I really liked it. 5/5

    Love ya!

    -` Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Great imagery with the snowflakes!

    i love these line:
    In your eyes, I lose myself,
    So let's not go...anywhere else.

  • 17 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    That poem was really good, kinda sexy too actually. Dont ask me how it just gives that feel. Very nice. Actually want to write a response to it. So when Im dont with it let me know what u think, =). Great Job on the poem 5/5.
    -Thuggy

  • 17 years ago

    by Toni

    Love it, simple but very eloquent. have missed ur poems xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Sarah, I so love this write....

    If I may make only one small suggestion, remove the "ands"

    Other than that, I think it flows well and the rhyme is great.

    You have a wonderful way with words, beautifully written from a precious and loving heart. Your talent amazes me.

    ps... I'll certainly miss you on myspace too! But we'll keep the hugs coming in CC&P!!

  • 17 years ago

    by katrina

    What a mad poem.....Ur words are absolutely beautiful.....thanks for producing such feeling in ur work thanks luv katrina

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    So beautiful and very well written.
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW touching, im speechless this was so good, no cliches great rhythem, excellent i felt everyword...keep it up.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by mingyuan

    Good

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kasie

    Great poem keep up the good work. keep writing and i'll keep reading. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by m!2235_d_f7!n+!!

    I love this

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifers lair

    I love it...