Debbie I loved this poem. It seems like everthing you write is a amazing work of art. You can turn your words in to pictures. Excellent job Deb!

Very different, but it was neat. It's nice to read poems that are a little different. I just did one like that called Little Miss. It's not what you think. Anyways, good job!
Charisma*

An amazing poem with great word choice, once again you have showed you are a great poet, keep up the great job.

JJJJJust gone....somewhere in this...
I was watching a snowflake.....
imagery is beautiful.....awesome, amazing, it has all been said.....

Just pushed the envelpe again in this one.....just got to wrench myself from this poem....outstanding.

vote..one in a million!!!

Envelope? opps....see what happens!!
thinking of snowflakes!! ha.ha.ha.

I have to agree with Cindy, you seemed to paint a magical picture with your words.
Excellent imagery and for a free verse poem, a brilliant fluid flow
5/5
*Gem*

Very nicely penned. I loved it. Your word choice was very nice. The flow and structure were both very strong. Great job!!!

Peace, Joe

This is a very good poem debbie, flow is perfect for a nonrhyme poem, love the word choice, adding u to favs. i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Very good free verse. The imagery is wonderful. Another 5/5!

Always such eloquent words. nicely done. 5/5

Nice, I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

Snowflake falling
Floating, fluttering, dancing in the sky
lands in snow, there, somewhere..
go I.

I a snowflake...silently falling with no sound, no thought....to land in snows of whiteness.....

I love this poem it tells more then th eye can read

The imagery you painted in this was outstanding. it was like I could see everything what was happening. I loved this, so deep and moving, and written so beautifully. perfect flow throughout the piece. I have enjoyed reading your work, so welcome to my favourites!