This is really well written. keep it up. the images you create in the readers minds are so vivid. superb!
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Wow very powerfull u rearly know how to use and put your emotions into your writing, i hope to read more from u x

Really amazingly done its shows the real face of emotions....5/5

God bless u

Wow this is good makes me jealous

Wow! I really like this poem I no what it feel 2 just want 2 get it out but still there's no way... hope 2 hear some more new poems
Ur a great writer :)

~Danni~ x