Comments : Out of Breath XP

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    AWESOME POEM!!!!! i loved it, it was so good. i can really relate to what you are syaing keep up the really awesome work. shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and interesting poem. Imagery is great and you created superb, haunting atmosphere.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    This poem was good all the way but the end got to me....Because that's how people think you're some sick....Ok I'm letting it go..Great poem..truely...