I hate boys that think it's funny to mess with a girls most precious possesion. Her heart.
And you portrayed that excellently.
You got your point across in simple words that people can easily relate to.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Not bad at all. I gave it a 4 overall but I really do think you have a lot of talent. I'm extremely excited about reading more things from you in the future. Take care

"I thought I loved you
I thought you weren't like the rest
But I thought wrong
Out of all Congrats your the best"

I really liked this poem. It said things in a way some ppl have trouble addressing. The only problem is, I don't understand that stanza I pasted up there. I just don't get what you were trying to say.
PV

It seemed like everything flowed till the end it seems like the line "My heart is left bare" was kind of forced but other than that it was very good