Well i can relate to most of these words at the moment..
I liked the structure, it's a finely written poem =)
5/5
*Gem*

I agree with Gem, the structure of the poem is great. It's easy to see that you are getting better with every poem you write. Such strong emotion from someone so young is very rare. Keep up the good work.

Very nice poem. I like how you described all of those emotions. Keep writing and take care.
~kiesha

I liked this poem! very nice job!

So much hurt in this poem, i wish you didn't feel like this, i wish no1 ever did. i have, and it is not good.

5/5 great poem anyway.

David

Interesting, I liked how each verse was very short yet very powerful and managed to explain in a deeper way the beginning word. nice work

This is a very cool way of writing i must say, the rhyming and structure were good and there is a special feeling when reading it.. cant quite explain it.

You have a talent so keep up =)

This is such a wonderful piece, i can relate so much to this, keep it up dear, you have a powerful and wonderful talent!

Jenna