This is a good poem
;)
Great work

Amazing poem, thank you so much for submitting this into the Dark World Contest. You have such a talent the imagery was absolutely phenomenal in this piece. Excellent work!

~jas~

Comment #1 (for winning 2nd place in me and my friends joint contest.. i will be commenting half and she will do the other half)

WOW! amazing poem.. i really liked it... i dont usually like dark poems because they're disturbing and its hard for me to read them but this one is amazing.. the word choice was great as well as the flow.. spectacular write!