Comments : The Lake

  • 17 years ago

    by redangel

    The end was surprising but good

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Heya random person, I really love th eoutcome of this poem. I think it's really emotional at an amazing level and you're really talented. Never stop writing!!!! Looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.

    xxfvalconbridgexx

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Erm, i am not reviewing twice....

    I'm so sly. I just love this poem it's one you could read over and over again and never get sick of. You know what i mean?

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