Cute poem, watch your flow on a few places, but it was good, i liked it. really nice job 5/5

Greatttt poem.. i like it a lot...nice flow .. a little cliche but still nice.. keep up the good work!

Beautiful Poem!!!! voted 5/5

Aww. It's so cute. ^_^ It's just..amazingly cute. Lol.

I liked the emotion in this. I really felt as if it was me who was falling in love. I liked that atmosphere you put around me. It gave me chills, but the good kind lol.

The flow was really good near the beginning, and then it started to get sloppy. Try to keep the same flow all the way through unless it's intentional. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha