Comments : One Dream

  • 13 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wow, this is frackin' goregous. Don't you ever tell me you can't write well EVER again!! This is beautiful, and I love it. :) I particularly loved this stanza [though they're all awesome]

    "A Dream is something you plan for
    And think of all your life
    And no matter what leads up to it
    You make it turn out right"

    That's really touching, and so true.

  • 13 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    Athame read this to me and i was like "wow...are u sure ryan wrote this?!" its beautiful...pure genius...wait a writing about u here...okay now.