Ooh!!! i really really like this!! great job!
"Don't make me- Go and play, run or hide.
Try to save me- beat you dead, find me alive
Please kill me- save my soul, exhaust my mind...
...Just make us- Go and play, run and hide
Please save me- see us, dead together, alive
Don't kill me- save our soul, exhaust my mind"

i love how you changed that part at the end, it's really sexy (i meant "sexy" in a serious way, i promise)