I really like this it's really good. keep it up. shanik

Good

Excellent poem...
i know how this feels
so true....
it pains doesnt it...when we try to pretend but deep inside we know what we are...
gr8 work
keep it up
love
amy

I love this poem, it is so heartfelt. Great vocabulary that you and your sister have.
5/5
~Stephen White

Aww. man this was wicked as!!! well done babe i loved it!!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Omg! omg! omg! i started crying with this one. literally!!! my ex loved superman and thats what he was to me.... omg you can seriously relate to my feelings. im glad i can read another person's feelings that are similar to mine. i love it! great great job