What an interesting range of descriptions and word formations. You put contradicting images together and actually made the make some sense...how?
I will say though I had trouble reading the first stanza. it was the last two lines in particular. Comfort THE sounding bells...was odd. I didn't understand "the." Did you mean "the comfort" or "comfort sounding" instead?
Also, the last line stops in the middle of a sentance...until...what? It seems until was only used to rhyme, so you may what to go over that part.
The rest was very well written though.
Thanks for sharing.