Wow, I liked this. It was more of a story than I poem to me but enjoyed it nonetheless. I holds a lot of truth in its words. *5/5*

Simple yet effective, although it was challenging to keep up with which body was going what...lol.
I guess the message is you become somebody in love, and nobody alone...and the person you love is everybody...
It was different an certainly a teaching poem.
Only thing I can suggest is punctuation, it always helps.
Thanks for sharing.

Wow great job. my poems are not t.m.i. they get the point across in a more vivid way. and im writing a book, so there has to be some real intreasting parts. and its not my fault for black and white... lol. i have that pic up on my wall still. well going to work. bii.
~TheQuestioner
p.s. miss talking to you.
p.s.s. dont be haten on my poetry cuz its detailed. lol.