So incredibly sad. It was amazingly beautiful and the pain was so easy to see in it. Wonderful.

WOW that is reallly good.. i liked it alot.. good job..

check out mine. :) thanks

always alana

Amazing I love it. Emo rocks hard core.

This poem seemed to be very fast But it creates the sense of danger or depression like something is about to happen and its heading right for you. This poem is very sad and deep, great describing words!!
xoxroxyxox (P.S keep it up)