Ben,
You write of love with such beauty. Your words sing just like the birds. Excellent job! 5/5

Deep write...
thanks for comment...
appreciate that..

I hate change, and everything used to have its place.
Until your surprising absence left me feeling erased.

i liked those lines so much :)

Nicely written....good imagery and word choices....flow and rhyme impeccable!

This is really amazing, words/rhyme/depth...everything fits together and make this a outstanding piece altogether.

loved it

all the best and take care