Comments : Treasures.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    That poem was beautiful!!
    I'd say this is the best friendship poem i have read on this site, truly amazing in my eyes i loved every part of it.

    I will lift from you your burden
    And cry for you your tears
    Bear the pain of all your sorrows
    Though it may be for a thousand years.

    This stanza to me stood out the most, great flow throughout the poem and the rhyming was good too. Definately 5/5
    Well done!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This poem is absolutely perfect! 5/5