I liked the way you had expressed your thoughts in this one. you seem really talented. how long have you been into writing poems?
looking forward to reading more of your poems,
Marjan

One word...WOW.
this poem is fantastic..dark and beautiful.

Always,
Koriey

I've just been writing for some months.. Like to dream myself away in them :) thanx for the feedback :)

This is really powerful, dark and deep. Written well, 5/5. Em