Comments : Another fallen angel.

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow someone with consistant meter.
    Very well written! Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by deadbeatromance

    Amazing
    -deadbeatromance

  • Wow in such a short poem you managed to make it so incredible

  • 12 years ago

    by KT Mackey

    Very well writen!

  • 12 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I love your peices. Im addicted. Amazing Job!

    ELaine

  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem, it is interesting and very unique. Flow is excellent and wording also. First stanza is the greatest. i like topic too.
    Well done,5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Im not worried about it being nice.
    Its an expression of emotion for the lost of a loved one.
    thanks for your comments. xxx