I thought this was a beautiful poem. The emotion behind the text allows the reader a glimpse at the events and creates a tone. Great write.

Wow deep, i like this one a lot, its unique great style here :)

lissa

And every bit of pain that hits me right in the heart.
Makes me stronger but weaker ever since we've been apart.
And I finish this poems with every tear that I cried.
Hoping some day you'll never say goodbye

thats beautiful imergery right there and such heart, I can feel your pain soking through,....amazing work. keep it up cant wait to read more and check otu my new stuff.

melissa

Ohh, wow!
i know i havent read your stuff in a while.
your still an amazing writer!
i LOVE it!
its super awesome!!

--Samy

Man i love this poem JayJay this is my favorite:)

You're really good at poetry.
You never find many teen boys that write
but great work.
comment mine if you want
GREAT JOB!
Sami

This is a great poem.
Great choice of words,and perfect rhyme.
I loved how you were able to keep flow and not lose the tone of the poem.

Amazing job!

-Kayla Kayy.

It's very rare to find a guy your age that can actually write a decent poem, but you, you have a better understanding than most. you know that it takes feeling and passion to do this. It really shows. i felt the pain in this and i could see a little image of everything you said. it wasn't of you, but of my past. (only with guys lol) It's very well written and i enjoyed it. Great job sam.
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

Ur poems are amazing!!! u alredy know dat cuz ive told u b4 lol..but i dnt get tired of readin em over n over again lol

Jay i LOVE ur poems! dey r sooo good!...i miss talkin 2 u!