Comments : Nothing More Than...

  • 14 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is great! And I know entirely how you feel! Great job!
    xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    A beautifull poem and i enjoyed reading it )) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Congrats on getting h/m:) anywho, great great GREAT poem. loved the detailing and emotions. its flow was perfect, and it really pulled me into it and kept me interested:) i particulary liked this stanza:

    Nothing more than a melody
    Played only for the pleasure.
    We're like two pirates searching,
    For some nonexistent treasure.

    just wow. 10/5 if thats possible somehow lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 2

    soo adorable.. sad but really great.. perfect flow and great choice of words and rhymes.. i love how all the middle stanzas begin with the same line and you repeat the last line in the first stanza.. that always leaves an impression.. great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Wow i love it!...please excuse me cuz i kinda zone out when i read things so for the first bit i had no clue what i was reading cuz my mind didnt grasp any of it...but like 3 or 4 stanzas from the bottom i realized it was called Nothing more than...and i realized how great it was...im gonna go back and see what my mind didnt catch =D

    142212313123.51/5

  • 14 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Again the rhyming was awesome. 5/5 for sure. I cannot stop reading your poetry. I think you earned a spot on my Favorites.

  • 14 years ago

    by DrowningDreams

    Hey, i rate this 5 because its awesome =]] xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Genna

    Oh my word! You are such a great poet!

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #1:

    Ok...there are so many favorite lines I'm not sure I can list them all...but I'll try lol....

    - There's not even a battle here,
    So nothing can be won. - (great parallel here)
    - It'd be like music in our heads,
    Yet never written or composed. - (this was a very unique and awesome rhyming word, and it's easy to understand without being too simple)
    - Nothing more than a melody
    Played only for the pleasure.
    We're like two pirates searching,
    For some nonexistent treasure. - (that whole stanza is just amazing imagry...pure talent, and is totally poetic without being cliche at all)
    - Like water in a boiling pot
    It would all end up in vapor. - (this just makes me jealous of your comparisons! :)

    This whole poem is incredible. (I hope this doesn't sound too corny, but) I am honored to actually know the person who wrote this! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this, makes a person think, that`s for sure. I like all the metaphors in this, it really shows off your talent just that much more.

    5.5
    :]

  • 13 years ago

    by Becca

    Beautifully written!