I absolutely loved this poem, the flow was great and the rhyming didn't seem forced at all! I really enjoyed reading it great job and thanx for entering the contest, well done :)

5/5

I just wanted to say thank you for your comment, I think you very well may have made my day. Beside that, you are an amazing writer; the rhyme scheme is great and your message is beautifully described. Keep it up.

The symbolism of - the golden band ....untouched by the sun - is exquisite. The wonderful contrast's continue with the great line 'He sleeps with me and
dreams of her'.
This is a beautiful bitter/sweet poem.

GREAT!!! i love it...it is so sad!

xoxo kisses

Awww this is so cute yet very heartbreaking I'm sorry about this nice poem

This is an excellent poem it reminds me of my father after my mothers death i could see these words comeing from his gf

This is clever and flows perfectly. Good job!