This poem relates to me and i think u did a great job

Encounter pain to stay alive....good line...Overall an ok poem in my opinion...I liked the first stanza the best...

It was good, but I've seen a lot of poems here like this, and once again I must say, the shorter the poem, the stronger it should be. After reading your other poems, I know you have it in you. Keep it up!

-Liz-
~of life to live, I gave it all up~

"Happiness is pure suicide,
Encounter pain to stay alive."

I love those lines.
Okay, Tyanna seems to have nothing better than to say okay to every amazing poem. I wonder what her line of comparsion is. -.-

I think it's perfectly flawless.
I think there's one grammar error though, babe.
You have shes in the first stanza it should be [she's]. Just a little change. =]

ily
xxxx
5/5

Reality leaks horror;
Friendship is a mystery
[what do you mean by that?]

Who's real and who's fake,
[somehow its really hard to trust even our own friends.. in my situation even my family and relatives i feel so dough... ]

i feel the message.. thanks alot... 5/5