Oh wow.. that's intense..
I did not see the plot of the ending coming in this one. A woman pushed to the breaking point.. Nicely told..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

You are a very talented person, but it was a little jumbled towards the middle...please keep writing, I loved it

Hey Mike....
Well...Saying that my poem is good...Is harsh...Especillay when you are this good at expressing yourself. I have to admit that you did a great job on most of your poems and i really hope to be reading more from you. Keep up the great work. Im impressed and glad to finally find some beyong 20 writing really expressive poems ;)

Wow, 5.5 the ended could have been a little stronger but it was very well written! thx for rrc on my poem :)

Wow this is excellent I *loved* it! because it was amazing you need to write more cuz this is awesome

p.s. thanks for your comment~
Love you tons
Kaila

WOW THAT WAS INTENSE, ur such a great writer ur in my faves and i really enjoy ur work. pls feel free to comment thnxs. ill read more later promise. :)

melissa

This is really good 5/5