5/5

You showed love in the most wonderful and innocent way... Kids can love as much as the elders do.

A beautiful poem. I can relate to it.

This is an amazing poem. it gives me goosebumps!

Very moving

Aw this is so sweet. I really liked it.

This is amazing... i would honestly say... the best one of the 2 other poems i read... you really put the love into it... at one point... it reminded me of my love :D keep it up always...

Robie

Real good poem thanks for your comments on my 2 poems

Tears in my eyes again...
That ending was just perfect to such a sweet yet sad piece.
Excellent work, as always.