Man! I just love your style of writing. I can't really explain it but it's just really good!!! Lol! I wish I could categorize it but I just can't....it's in a level of its own. Lol, anyways, whatever you're doing keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Gave you a 5 got the beat(meter) yet look again at the first two verses may I suggest that the beat should have started there but just missed. Most enjoyable. Ray

I love the third stanza especially. good one