Nice...very nice...although it does get a little confusing towards the middle :)

Hahahaha I like this poem. Your very descriptive

I lik it

The over all story is a fun read... the way u play it sounds very wonton.. the style belies ur age however and the flow is a lil lacking thus distracting. keep writting... i wrote like that when i was a teen and my skill has developed with my experiences and maturity. well done.

Yo that shit was hott amazing i loved it

Hot poem!

Wow..
this is explicit, and horrible at the same time if you did his brother..
You need to hit me up and let me know if this is just imigination or true..

theycallmepak@yahoo.com

Wow very explicit , some good description plus that guy must ve been one lucky man.

ig vie it 5/5 =D bye

Wow thats awsome...i really like this poem...its funny its own twisted way...

Lol good jood with this 1 2 sounded like it waz good lol 5/5*

Haha wow, to be honest, this poem was sexy and funny at the same time.

Loved itt :)

5/5

Ok so now i'm trying to decide

if youdid or didn't do it
so did you????
5/5