Comments : Willow Creek

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    An ultimate thought & lovely selection of words indeed. Your imagination and the way u have shared so much abt a rose...is just so outstanding..loved ur poem a lot

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was beautiful!
    A single rose that's held it's head high,
    Begins to wilt as the years pass it by,
    Scolded by wind, and the bitter rain,
    A wild angel lives, no one can tame,
    This gives an amazing start to your poem and it just gets better. Excellent Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Goregous. Absolutely goregous. This has beautiful imagery, superb flow and cadence. I adored the first and last stanzas. Not to say the others weren't good, they were. But those two really stuck out. Wonderful job on this.

    My only suggestion
    "Scolded *my wind, and the bitter rain" - *by