Wow! Wow! That is great! Should not have read it before bed. Your word choices are amazing. Very well written. You have a Gift for poetry writing. Thinking of you your friend Cindy

Hey hun this was really good it was really powerful. ther was so much emotion coming trhough. very well written! xx

Nice job, good ryhming scheme... very solid piece of work. Thanks for your comment

You wrote to me on one of my poems and I just wanted to say thank you for what you wrote. I really liked your poem as well. You are very talented. Keep them coming =)
Take Care.

Wow this imagery is so vivid, a different twist to a love gone wrong yet your words are beautiful put into description. well done!!!

ps i love this part

I Have So Many Of You To Kill Before I Die

This new combination of favorites is outstanding....Bravo!

especially like this verse:

"My Life Has Been A Rainbow With Shades Of Grey
Now The Brightest Of Them Is Simply Fading Away
Pushed Back And Forth By My Destiny's Tide
And I Just Kept On Learning Ways To Survive"

a joy to read.....a little scary....but fun! 5/5

Very creative. I guess vote ke liye kuch bhi karoge.

U used really good words in this poem. i love it!

Wierdness. Lol. But I enjoyed it, it was very different.

Wow!! I really like your choice of words. The best poem i have read !

Wow.. so wait.. this is a bunch of stanzas from different poems..? i really like this stanza "So Nice To Have You All Today
Welcome To My Theater Of Dream
Ride Hell While Watching My Play
But Be Silent When I Scream"

what poem is that from id love to read it?

Good work. i enjoyed reading this poem even though it was sad. You must be very talented

Amazing work dude, a write well done. . .keep it up u obviously have magical talent :)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!

My my, That was intense...I know exactly how you feel man, I am the same wat nearly every day of my life. It's exhausting sometimes isn't it? Life's tuff, we all know it...You just gotta be strong & keep on fighting for what you want...or even if you don't know what you want..just live it in the best way that you can...float on...-LIVE-....

I must say, exquisite poem, you really have a fair share of talent and understanding. Which, one finds, is essential in becoming a great poet. I myself am fairly new to this website and when I chanced across your particular poem I simply had to stop and admire the great art that it has to offer. Keep up the good work!

With all due respect,
Brandon B.

OMG!!!!!!!! this is great it has so much emotion. a little scary but that's part of the charm. i love this poems

Wow!

really goood!!!!
nice choice of words...

5/5
amazing job!!!

kaiLa

Wow that really deep 5/5