This poems great... good job,
you have alot of talent! :)

Wow, that's good. Keep at it! It's really sweet that you would write something like that.

This is sweet, marcus! wow, 5/5

Aww~~ Marcus your an amazing poet..In fact im a bit jealous lol.
My favorite stanza was...

'Sometimes I can see your glee
other times I can see your pain
one day I hope to be able to see feelings for me
Regardless of what I see my feelings for you will remain'

This stanza added power to the poem and really opened up your emotions. You describes the eyes so well and how they can captivate you lol.
xx Rox

Awwwwwwww ! thts so CUTE ! my god ur Soo talented !
God bless U !!
xxoxx

I loved it! amazing job 5/5

U have great talent and ur poems are great