Comments : Sweet dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Aww. That was sweet.
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Usually I don't like these love poems...But I loved this one..It made me feel like I was the one that was feeling it....Keep it up....5.0 From Me....

  • 17 years ago

    by Danielle

    Very elegantly written, the flow is perfect, when you wake up from the dream it stops aburptly, just as in real life when you realize its not really there.

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    Great job. straight to the point. simplicity is a great technique. sweet job. ;)