The message is good, but you might want to improve your grammar, and/or spelling. Unless it's your personal style. But despite that, very relatable!

I knwo you really like the boi but just give up on him if he aint willin to come to you because he gots a girl then he aint "about it" you feel me? if he really wants to be with you he'll be with you. he'll forget his other girl and come to you but yeh though this is a really good poem I like the fact your are real