Ben,
What a beautiful poem! I can really relate to this. These words you write are so true. Excellent job!

How sad..... to be alone....nicely done.

"Until we meet again my queen depart.
You hold the key to my eternal heart.
I'll wait always and forever to take your hand.
Begin our journey for two, in the promised land. "

^My fav of the piece. Well done 5/5

"Until we meet again my queen depart.
You hold the key to my eternal heart.
I'll wait always and forever to take your hand.
Begin our journey for two, in the promised land."

That's my favorite part. Good one.

Beautifully penned. Good rhythm and rhyme. I loved it!!