Wow sad poem. it's filled with so much emotion. i definitely liked it tho. and i really like what you said in it. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

This is a really sad one. You wrote it beautifully though. If you have a myspace add me... www.myspace.com/marcellan

5/5

marcella

Clap clap again! another brilliantly written piece, does your profile decieve me or are you really 13? these poems are so impressive! especially your word use and layout! thats fantastic for a 13 yr old! I APPLAUD YOU!!

xoxo Lucy!