Comments : Bad Best Friend

  • 13 years ago

    by Katie

    This one is great. The rhythm works well, and the rhyme sceme does as well. Good job.

  • Wow i can totally relate to this its awesome i can tell that you took time and effort on this and your feeling is awesome 5/=)

  • 13 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Great work hun, another great poem, I take it this was the same girl from your last poem too, and the poem I am about to read is titled to Michelle, so I'm taking a stab and guessing thats her name lol
    keep your head up hun, who needs enemies when you have friends that lie right.

    xoxo Lucy

  • 13 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    A good poem and all the flow and all is good and an understandable poem also,
    nessa

  • 13 years ago

    by im his bbygrl

    Amazing i've been backstabbed over and over again by people i trusted. thank you for rating my and commenting mine.

  • 13 years ago

    by PoeticalHeartless

    Ii LYK DiiSZ POEM DONT WRRY iiVE BEEN STABBED iiN DA BAK SO MANY TiiMESZ 2 BUT YU LEARN FROM YUR MiiSTAKESZ ND RiiTE DERE YU LEARNED DAT PERSON WUSZNT A TRU FRiiEND
    5/5 iiF U NEEDA TALK U CUD PRiiVATE MESSAGE ME

    BEHiiND DESE BiiG BROWN EYESZ
    LiiES DA TEARSZ ii CRY

  • 13 years ago

    by MARI

    This one is soo good i can totlally relate to how u feel i hae been betrayed so many times and thats the rea i dont have bestfriends anymore!!! greart poem keep ur head up high!!