I LOVE this!!
I wish I could write these types of poems

I thought everything about this was perfect
**It keeps stealing my text!!!**

Very nicely written, short and to the point, I enjoied it. Good Job.

Peace, Joe

Wow. that sounds like a difficult type of poem, but you really pulled it off well. great work. loved it. 5/5 congrats again for gettin a place in my contest.

Excellent, very well adhered to the rule and nicely penned. The wordings are great and you have added so much of meaning with those precise wordings. Great 5/5

Tc With love
Fsams