Its awsome.. if u dont mind who or wat is ur inspiration on making poetries ....... if u have time plzz check me out ill wait 4 u ... i beg ya!!

"your bright blue eyes,
put a smile on my face,
when you simply touch me,
my heart begins to race."

These words have a special meaning for me.

Great job.

It was great i really liked it

5/5 I like it, its simple and nice. It actually reminds me of one of my friends. :)