Benny
You have done an amazing job on this poem!

Although it feels so good,
You seem so distant,
Holding you tight and loving,
Yet you seem so cold and far,

This stanza really stood out to me. How much our actions can affect someone elses heart.
Excellent job!
5/5
Love your Nana Cindy

Tragic in a heartfelt way. teary eyes for this one. so sad. beautifully written. amazing word choices and deep emotions. i love it, i love all your work.
--lovedorughtmelody