Comments : The Pain

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Oh the pain that you feel just reaps from this write. It reached into my heart and grab it and allowed me to feel the pain and hurt you have felt. May you one day be able to over come this and allow someone to touch your heart again with all the peace and joy that you deserve young lady.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    "I buried the pain deep inside,
    with anything sharp that i could find,
    i covered the slashes so nobody could see,
    just how the world was treating me".

    i absolutely loved this verse, this poem was amazing and written with such strong emotions. i really hope your feeling better, its not a way to live. well done

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Great poem so powerful 5/5