This is great. this will reacieve many more comments and votes! i loved the way you write!

5/5 David

Another great one.. and its soo sad.. but cute.. a very enjoyable read.. however i do have a nother suggesion try taking out the word "anything" in the second line of the second stanza to help the flow

It's a cute poem. sad but cute. i jus dont understand wether its supposed to rhym or not. beacause some stanzas rhym and others dont. i think the flow needs a little work too.

''but they just won't away,
cus my love for you will always stay the same.''

I think you meant wont go away, an cus should be cause.

Apart from that, I really liked this, the emotion and depth behind the words are clear to see.
I enjoyed the imagery and I thought it flowed well.
Cool title as well =D

This was sweet. It is cliche though. You have some spelling and homophone mistakes in here aswell.
I could be a much better poem if you fixed those.

Great job on this one! Keep it up!

Awhh this is sad:[ but really good writing. keep up the good work!

I found that this poem is very easy to relate to for many people out there, and I am sure of it. I thought you did a good job with it. Nice work.