Whoa! this is a really great poem. the flow and word use is so unique.

5/5 David

Ok overall not a bad poem. but it has many small errors that kind of aded up, i know that i myslef don't like to do this, but shes isn't a word, it's she's. also this part i just, do not like: But little do they know,
she has more problems then they think. they know, and think. try to use a different saying to get your message across here, also the same 'saying'is used again in the poem. lastly the language was basicly boring. there wasn't mature descriptions, or words. it was jsut on the surface. now i can understand how that theme/ tpye would work for the beginning, but i think you should dive deeper into emotions and show them.

zzLauren

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

Please use puncuation . It would help the poem SO MUCH MORE . It wasn`t bad . You kept repeating some words which kind of took away from it, and I think you should work on it a bit more . But overall, it wasn`t bad .
..__MiNDYY

Overall a good poem, just a few mistakes here and there. The flow was odd, but good and ended up working.

This was good, i liked how u wrote for some one elses feelings...usually people dont do that... nice poem 5/5.

David Marshall

Wow. this was amazing... idk what to say. i feel like i was just reading the story of my life. i mean im not about to say i know how you feel because i dont. but im just letting you know, your not alone out there. it happens to the best of us. great job. and thank you. this poem really touched me.

Cute poem.. it flows nicely but the structure could use some work

I think for the most part you were completely off rhyhm or didn't have one. And completely too repetetive. But it's ok. You have good ideas, jist you don't really say what you have to say the best way that you can. As indivisuals your stanza's are impressive but they don't flow together and you dont really rhyme.

I can relate once again I've come to really enjoy your peoms !!!! I lvoed this one!

I loved the story you told it was absoulty wonderfully written. The word choice was good, the emtions were deep. It didn't have mush of a flow, but it didn't matter, I was too engrossed in the read. So it keep my attention.
Really you did an amazing job 5/5 although you deserve more.