Omg!! i really liked this poem. the words the way its been written everything was just breath taking.. great poem!! thank u soo much for ur comments on my poem! they meant alot!! u keep up the great work!! =) xx

Its amazing how u can express yourself with such deep emotional feelings. I really admire that. I know u inspire many others with ur creative writing. You certainly inspire me.

Wow! Very passionate poem. This was a very enjoyable write. I think it brings feelings back that some miss. Take Care Cindy

Now is this a love poem? or is this an erotic poem. you choose.

5/5 David