Comments : Poor little children

  • 17 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    I love it.. the words created such an insane atmosphere,
    and i loved how the beginning
    was 'those poor little children' then
    switched to 'these oor little children'
    at the end as they got closer

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Woah. sweet. i love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Dang...intense. your amazing zack! *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    Wow..i really enjoyed this poem..keep it up