Nice one Rachel....different for you....love the flow and rhythm.....5/5

Excellent job Rachel! Your word choices are wonderful. The flow is great. I think you are Beautiful also!

Owch!

I loved it! Your so great 5/5
*kaila*

I know lots of broken things. awesome write. good flow. 5/5 from me.

Owch.owch.....

Great poem. I like it very much.

Excellent poem.the flow was amazing .i loved it well done.

I love this poem well written you have amazing talent keep it up

I love it great poem!!

I loved your poem keep it up!!

Sad & Unique.
The poem was unique, something I have never seen before. I mean this is a good way, lol.

You have tremendous amounts of talent. You have a way of capturing heartbreaking feelings into one poem. Absolutely fantastic. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

That was so sad. Nice poem.

Very sad poem. made me feel sad also. gd luck

Great poem. i repetition of broken whatever is very effective. i love:
Broken hope, love's a game,
doesn't last, ends the same.
Broken sleep, love's the cause,

COMMENT # 2

i really love this poem.. the emotion is over the top and WONDERFUL! the rhymes are fit together perfectly and the flow is flawless... great job

Sad..
beautiful pain.
Good job Rachel!!
It's tan diferente; I love that!

This poem is soo good! I liked it alot! I love the use of words you used in this poem.... it's great! Thanks for the comment on my poem "waves of joy"... it means the world! Awesome work... it's a 5/5 for sure :0)!
*Just Lisa*

Omg, this is my favorite of yours so far. its beautiful. thank you for sharing your great talent with me.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Excellent poem.