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  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    You know, Joe, there is something nearly satirical about these three poems.......poetic lines, perhaps, for characters in an off-broadway play about teenagers- who-write-poetry-on-poetry-sites kind of satirical.....
    *note; your sense-of-humor will carry you through......

  • 17 years ago

    by Joe

    Um... thank you... I think... (my name is not joe... It's Kayomi...)

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Well done. title and ending of each line was awesome.

    5/5 David